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Post by rexlee on May 21, 2011 17:59:09 GMT -5
[/size] The Form[/center] First Name:rexlee. Last Name: fenix Short Description: i am big r. What you are: weapon, Personality:smart Physical Description: big and strong [
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Post by fisheble on May 22, 2011 20:25:19 GMT -5
No, I don't think this an acceptable bio. The grammar is wrong, the user only typed eleven words and clearly put no effort into this bio. In addition, there are no details. Take personality, for example. Okay, he's smart. Is he funny? Nice? Mean? Creepy? Nerdy? One adjective does not cut it. Also, the physical description is practically nothing. How tall is he? What color are his eyes and hair? What does he wear? Last of all, like Luna said, what kind of weapon is he?...is it even a he? Or is it a she?
I'm sorry if this seems a bit harsh, but this bio annoyed me a little. I try to put a good amount of detail into my bios, and I find it insulting that an eleven-word bio gets the same status as mine. |
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Post by Luna on May 26, 2011 17:55:36 GMT -5
fiiine, just to point out that this is a rather infromal RP...so, Rexlee: Accepted status revoked. Please fix.
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